关于书面表达中组词成句的原则与训练

书面表达中组词成句的原则与训练(五)

五、语言生动

文章要吸引读者注意，激发读者兴趣，语言就需生动，充满活力。若想使句子形式多样、语言生动、内容丰富，就必须通过以下方式对句子加以变化，而不是一成不变地使用“主——谓——宾”或“主——系——表”的句式来表达一切内容。

1、变化词语表达方式。例：

We are preparing for the coming exam. →

We are getting ready for the coming exam.

2．变化句型。例：

I’m sorry not to have answered your letter earlier. →

I’m sorry that I have not answered your letter earlier.

3．变化语序。例：

正装语序：The thief went away into the forest.

倒装语序：Away went the thief into the forest.

4．变化语态。例：

主动语态：We happened to meet him in the bookstore.

被动语态：He happened to be met by us in the bookstore.

5．变化句子开头。例：

主语开头：The radio weather report is very important in the farmer’s life.

表语开头：Very important in the farmer’s life is the radio weather report.

主语开头：They finished what they were asked to do in ten days in two.

宾语从句开头：What they were asked to do in ten days, they finished in two.

6．变化主体和客体。例：

I spent two yuan on the beancurd.(主体是I).

The beancurd cost me two yuan.(主体是the beancurd)

7．变化正面叙述和反面叙述。例：

正面叙述：He likes money best.

反面叙述：He likes nothing better than money.

练习:按括号内的要求改写下列句子：

may look after her by turns.(用take turns改写句子)

is never unfriendly to us.(用肯定式表达)

father walked home angry.(用形容词开头)

r can be made from wood.(将主体改为wood)

5.I could hardly recognize(认出) him at first.(改为倒装语序)

参考答案：

may take turns to look after her.

is always friendly to us.

y, her father walked home.

can be made into paper.

ly could I recognize him at once.